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I thought it was fascinating. Though a little short. I do understand it was made for a challenge. Make a longer upgraded version if you can though cause this game is awesome.

Usually I don't care too much about art in a game, since I judge the games, not everyone is an artist.
But this is different. It's a dressup game, where all the appeal is visual. Not only is it a pretty boring/annoying dressup game, but the art is low par. I suggest putting a lot of more effort into a game like this, and I assure you itll be better received :)

I wanted to like it, but the game just isn't fun. I got no joy from this. It's just awkwardly made. I'm sorry.

Very Nice game, but the ambiance was kind of awkward. I didn't get a good feel of what kind of thief I was. Since the art/character design/music. Was all conflicting.

I wouldn't consider this a game. But more of a system. A pretty good system though. You called it a puzzle though, so I spent a good 30 minutes or so playing around with the stars to create some coherent message to possibly go to a new stage.

There are a few things that involve making a game good.

The first is meaning
you must give the concept meaning to the player. This Is meaningful play. Why am I playing? Why should I keep playing. What's my goal and why should I accept it.

Second is Rules.
What defines this activity as the activity. What jurisdictions decide what I can't do here. Rules also give meaning to play.

Third is Reward.
The process of playing should reward the player in one way or another. No matter how simple the concept of being awarded for short time goals goes along way.

Obviously I'm not the best at making games, but no matter what you're doing I think those concepts should be in the back of your head.

It was nice. Though it was kinda easy, I went from kindergarten to having an MA PHD in one try lol

The how to play section is nice, except I can't read it.

You're getting better buddy! You should have made some better typography on the front page though, and you can't fit a 6 letter name in, which is sad for people like me with 6 letter names.
Also you should have added a slight intro just to polish the game. Maybe you could even add powerups, and stages. Missions? Or if you wanna be really crazy make this a story based game.

This game was very good. Completely excellent. The only thing I'm dissatisfied with is that you slid seeds of conspiracy in there. Like a possible more fascinating plot, and it never game through. Which made me somewhat sad.

If you don't know what I meant, the conversations with the other group members made it almost seem like SOW was secretly evil, and the Idk what the money is for also hinted too that. Some things people outside said really made me feel fascinated. Now I'm not saying you should make a plot I think is more interesting, but I didn't like how it seemed like it should be there, and never came to light.
Cause I mean you REALLLLY made it seem like there might be a mystery.

JacksonLango responds:

For sure! Originally there was gonna be a mysterious conspiracy plot but I just ended up running out of time/energy to implement it.

The concept was nice but the execution was bad. I didn't feel like I controlled the character, there's just now way to play this game with skill and be good at it. Simply because of how limited the character is.

Also on a side note, your attempt at a story made me cringe in pain, I don't mean to be rude, but that was just very amateur. Try and stay away from awkward colloquialism in a story like that, and maybe avoid clichés. Your typography isn't very fitting either, the beginning font was very bad, and didn't get me hyped in the slightest. Also I had no idea during the opening screen I could press space to continue. Lastly the music is pretty good, but having lyrics in games is something I think most people would agree with as awkward.

MrReynevan2 responds:

Pretty thanks for your opinion ;)
I'll think about things you've suggested.

I'll start fixing it all ASAP :)

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